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'Well,' Rose said. 'I haven't been to the ap pool.'
'What does it do?'
'I don't know that, let's find out.'

You both walk to the ap pool and have no idea what it does. Either way, you think that, if rose is right, your body will be quite different at the end of the day. Although, she isn't right, is she?
There can't be such thing that your body will actually change into something else.

You both step into the big room where the pool is. It looks quite normal, nothing special about this place.

You both decide to just step into the pool and see what happens, why the hell not?
The water feels warm, warmer then it should be. It is not unpleasant though; it is actually kind of nice.
You and Rose just wait for a moment until something happens and indeed it does. You see that Rose's hair is growing. It had been at shoulder length but now it's definitely growing. It quickle gets longer and longer.

She is looking at you the same way. As you turn around you see that your brown hair is growing too. And it's getting shinier. It looks much more beautiful then before and you look at it in awe.

What you don't notice is that the rest of your body is changing too. Your arms and legs become longer, especially your legs. Your hips become broader and you ass expands slowly until it is the most sexy ass you've ever seen. Your bikini bottom becomes too tight and you shift uncomfortable trough the water.

As you do you feel that something is different and you look down.
You let out a small yelp because of what you see. Your whole body has grown. It has gotten older or so it looks. Well, not only older, also way more mature and developed.
Right as you think of that your breasts start to grow. Slowly they become bigger. You cup your hands around them and lower yourself into the water.

You blush as you feel how sensitive they have become.
They're now more of a C-cup instead of a meagre B. You blush shyly but smile afterwards.

Rose comes closer to you.
'We've aged.' She says and it's true. Now you think of it, you have not gotten any different, just older.

Rose looks quite sexy too. She has become even more mature, her breasts have grown too and her hips look gorgeous. Her whole body has changed into that of a busty model.
She sees how you look at her.
'Oh you can look at yourself just as well, you look like a model.' She says.
You smile at her.
'If only these clothes.'
Right at that moment your bikini top becomes looser. You try to grab it and take a hand full of your boobs. You moan softly and Rose giggles.
'They're changing already,'
You blush and look down.

Your bikini has turned pitch black and is much more revealing now. The bikini bottom has changed too and it's also black. It snugs around your lady parts and wraps itself around your new tight ass.
'It looks great on you.' Rose says.

You smile.
'Want to go some place else?' You say with a much more mature and seductive voice.

'Oh yes sure, let's find out what we can do! No, wait'
She turns to you and whispers.
'Don't look back quite yet but there is a handsome boy checking you out.'
The first thing you do is watching behind you and indeed, there is an incredibly hot boy staring at you. As soon as you look at him, he starts walking to the two of you.
'How are you, can I accompany you?' he asks. So straight forward.
'Of course you can!' Rose yells, but you'll have to do it with this lovely lady because I have some stuff to do, now.'
With that, she walks away.
'I'm sorry,' the boy says. He looks guilty. 'That was my fault.'
You want to say it is and walk back to Rose but something stops you. 'Do you still want to accompany me?' you ask.

There are just a few options.
You read:
Sauna (together)
Sauna
Restaurant
Massage
Hot Tubs
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Sauna: [link]
Restaurant: [link]
Massage: [link]
Hot Tubs: [link]

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*Dinalfos5 Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well this is Sexy. This is only one path, where the regular Girl doesn't change in the shower at all, correct? We will have to see what this shower does to other girls.
And I agree, some more clarity on how you get here would be nice.
Maybe a "Links from:" and a list of all the previous paths you take to get there in the path would be nice. The number system is VERY confusing honestly, and I have difficulty navigating to know which path it is you are taking.
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:icontgf-019:
But can't you just start from the beginning? The numbers aren't that important right?

Well, you don't change in the regular shower but that counts for all the characters.
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*Dinalfos5 Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's still quite annoying figuring out all the right paths ourselves honestly, especially since you seem to mislabel and leave links blank often. Eventually it's going to be quite a chore to figure out the more choices we make. Some Back links can't be THAT hard to post and would probably make a lot of us feel better.

Well, what I meant is this pool. The Woman, and not a girl, as well as the "Sexy Woman" (Anyone who's been in the Special Woman's Shower) seem old already, I question what AP will do to them.
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:icontgf-019:
I don't leave links blanc! Do I?

It'll make them a little bit older but no too much, we don't want to end up as elderly people.

Yes okay, I think I will go and post links backward. Any idea how I can improve the numbers?

The first number is for the round which is obvious.
The middle number is for the second last choice you made.
The last number is for the last choice you made.

So 2.4.3 would be:
Second round
Girl
Special men shower
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:icondinalfos5:
*Dinalfos5 Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You did seem to at some points, from what I could tell. I tried to follow a numbering system for one of your chapters, and following it, I found no way to actually click on the right links. Either you left blank links for the choices, or you gave the story the wrong numbering sequence.

Right, yeah, I realize becoming elderly is not something most people would desire, and thus we should avoid.

Back Links would be useful, but I'm not sure how you can improve the numbers. A Problem would arise as you might have to keep adding numbers to the title. 10 choices down and you might end up with the hypothetical title like 10.4.3.4.2.3.3.2.1.4.2. etc. This becomes even more problematic when you have to use / to add in multiple choices. With Back Links in place, just a description of the events rather then an odd numbering system might be better. Something like "The Man's Arrival", "Girl's Special Woman's Shower." "New Woman's Vixen Pool", "Vixen at the Restaurant", I don't really know, but it might be more helpful and informative.

It's still not the easiest to follow, really it's not.
So far it seems simple enough, but like I said, I can only imagine it getting more chaotic as the rounds progress. And let's not even get started on what happens when you have to use the / to represent it taking up more then one choice. Names rather then numbers, with actual back links, would be nice.
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:icontgf-019:
I've got all the back links
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:icondinalfos5:
*Dinalfos5 Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, this will be helpful, hopefully helpful in the future as well.
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Any chance you can put some breadcrumbs indicating how you get to a certain page? I'm getting really confused following the new stories as they come out, and the number is inconsistent (I think this one should be 3.4.2 and 3.2.2 isn't actually possible?)
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:icontgf-019:
I never tried this before so there indeed are a few mistakes.

3.4.2 means:
3 Is the third round.
4 means that one round before, you chose 4
2 means that this is the second option from the last path.

It's difficult for me too to come up with a working system, maybe you should just follow the path from the beginning.
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dan it,I start to imagie the sence(what can I say,I'm always a fanof this kind of tg)
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