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We were finished Transforming the Rabbit couple, when suddenly we were interrupted by the attention of someone else who had seen what we had done.
"Oh wow, did you really turn that couple into Rabbits?" came a voice from behind me.
I turned to see a rather short and chunky girl in a black t-shirt and blue jeans, wearing a tiger ear headband, a fake tiger tail, and glasses. She had semi-long, shaggy black hair and brown eyes. Standing beside her was a taller man in a grey shirt with blue jeans, wearing a fake lion's mane with lion ears, and a fake lion tail. He had unkempt dirty brown hair and green eyes.
"Oh, if you really did that for them, do you think you can do that for us?" said the girl again. "How much did you charge them? I'm willing to pay almost anything. But if it's too much I'll have to go home and go to the bank to get at my savings."
"What, I didn't charge them anything. If I'm going to do it, it will be for free."
"Really, Free? Wow, this is awesome. Do you think you can do it for us? Can you do it for us too? Are you still able? Can anyone just ask or is there some process to go through first?" said the girl, very eager.
"Well I can do it just fine if I wanted to, it's no effort on my part beyond the time spent, and as far as I know, it's no strain on this thing. So I guess if you want it, I can do it for you. Not that I really know you, you are kind of a complete stranger." I said in reply.

"Oh, Hi, I'm Erica, and this if my soul mate Dannie. Please will you do me this favour."
"Well, I barely knew Lara and Robert, though at first I was just trying to correct previous mistakes. But okay, why not try it on you two then.
"Oh wow, this will be great then." said Erica, a giddy excitement in her voice, her hands clamped together, with her skipping on her spot.
"So what do you want me to change about you?" I asked her, not wanting to make any presumptions just yet.
"Oh, can you change my species, make me a hybrid like you made those two into rabbits." she answered.
"Oh, okay, let me guess, a Tiger then is it?"
"Yeah, that's it. I Guess the ears and tail give it a way." she answered.
"Okay, I'll see what I can do then."
I hit scan, and brought up her stats.  

"Name: Erica
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Hair colour:  Brown
Height: 5'2"
Weight: 142 Lbs.
Eye Colour: Black
IQ: 121
Mindset: Happy
Self-Esteem: below Average
Hair Length: Medium
Musculature: 2
Cup Size: A
Friendliness: average
Relationship: Dating
Personal Relationship: Stranger
Health: overweight
Clothing: Casual (6)
Species: Human.
Job: Telemarketer"

I looked over the changes, and set some things in motion. I switched Species to "Human 50%, Tiger 50%. Then I made a few other alterations. I changed Musculature to 8, to give her strong muscles for her new form. Then I went to height, and cranked it up quite high, to 7' 10". A Tiger should be tall in my opinion. Health became "In shape". Hair was changed to extra long. Her cup size went from A to C. IQ was raised to a few points to 135. I also changed Job to "Free Spirit", fitting for her soon to be new life. I left the rest alone.  Then I hit execute, and waited to see what would happen.

Her ears began to change first. They grew furry and changed shape, and moved up her head. They became long and round, covered in fuzzy orange, white and black fur, with black with with white spots on the back. A Tail burst from below her pants at her tail line, already covered in black and orange fur as it grew longer and longer, until it reach a full length of several feet, swishing back and forth as it grew. Fur began to grow on her body next. Unlike the rabbits, it grew all at once on her body, slowly growing out of new follicles on her body, growing into orange and black stripes with a white underbelly and lower jaw, quickly growing to a coarse length that covered her whole visible body.
Her face changed next. Her nose quickly reassembled into a cat's nose, becoming flat and triangular. Her face then began to push out into a muzzle, lengthening out of her face, reshaping her jawbone as it popped and cracked into place. Erica held her face, moaning in discomfort as the changes occurred. As her jaw stretched out, her teeth began to change shape as well, becoming longer and sharper, becoming the long hunting teeth of a carnivore's. Whiskers grew out above her mouth next, growing long and abundant. Her hands change next, swelling out into massive beefy paws, fleshy pads growing on their underside of her fingers and palms, and long, retractable claws growing in place of her nails, with fleshy sheaths growing over them. Her feet then followed, swelling in size as well, forcing her to step out of her shoes, growing pads, claws and sheaths as her feet swelled up beyond what her socks could contain.
At this point, her species changed, and she looked like a hybrid Tiger in body as well as mind. But the changes to her body hadn't ended, and the other changes I made began to kick in.
Her whole body swelled as it began to gain height and muscle mass. She grew up, larger and taller, gaining more then two and a half feet in height until she was almost 8 feet tall. Her calves were now quite visible below her pant legs, and her stomach and navel were showing quite a lot, her smaller clothing unable to cover up her new growing size. Her arms where also more visible out of her growing sleeves.  Her muscles bulged out in a similar proportion, her arms, legs, stomach and chest selling out to massive size, putting a lot of strain on her now super tight clothing. Her socks where the first to burst at the seems, already strained form her increased growth, falling aside below her now bare feet. Her sleeves and pant legs burst at the seems as well when they grew, bursting at the lg and arm seems, hanging torn at her hips and chest. Her breasts swelled out next, gaining 2 whole cup sizes to her already proportionately larger breasts.  This was the last strain her t-shirt could take, and it broke apart at the shoulder seems, falling apart in peaces at her back and front, falling to the grown, revealing her exposed black bra, strained against her overgrown breasts and chest. The last thing to change was her hair, growing out long and flowing down back her shoulders to the middle of her back, becoming shiny and healthy looking as it grew out.
The Changes finally over, Erica looked herself over, feeling her body with her paws where she couldn't see herself. She held her own tail in her hands, giddily looking it over as she could feel her own hands upon it.
She began to walk around but felt uncomfortable, her jeans, bra and panties hugging tightly around her body still.
"Ahh, I can't stand this, this really hurts" she said in response to her tight clothing. And with that, she ripped off her shredded jeans, and tossed them in the pile of rags that was her t-shirt and socks, as well as undoing the belt around her fake tiger tail, now ridiculously redundant. Her fake ears slipped easily off next, but she wasn't done there. Her overly tight bra was simply ripped off at the front, cut at with her claws and pulled apart with her new found tiger strength. Her breast were now fully exposed except for the coarse white fur that covered them. Like the rabbit-girl, her nipples were not visible through the fur. Her panties came next, the sides ripped apart at the hips, and pulled between her legs, tossed aside with the rest of her clothing. She now stood completely naked, but her private parts were still mostly covered in fur. Erica just stood there in her full naked, majestic tiger glory for a few moments, taking her new body in. She at last spoke.
"Oh Dannie, isn't this wonderful. Look at me, I'm a tiger, like I dreamed about, like I knew in my soul. I don't have to pretend, don't have to settle for dressing up and role playing. Now I'm a real tiger girl, isn't this wonderful?"
"Yeah, you look great hun, super sexy and super strong." said Dannie.
"Oh Dannie, you should totally join me. You're always acting like a Lion. I think we'd make a perfect pair like this." said Erica.
"Oh, I don't know, seems like a lot of fun, but seems like a big commitment." Dannie said.
"Oh, come on Dannie, it's already lots of fun. You get to live out your fantasies with me. I don't really see us being able to stay together otherwise. Our relationship might get complicated otherwise.
"I know, but it's such a big change, what if I don't like it" Dannie said.
"Come on Dannie, don't be a Coward. Take a leap and trust me when I say it will all be okay. Find your Courage and become a lion." Erica said, looking down at her boy friend, holding him in her now massive arms, looking deep into his eyes.
"Okay, you're right, no sense being scarred. This is the start of a new life together. I would have dreamed about this if I thought it at all possible. But now somehow it is, and I'm getting nervous. No that's not me, not who I want to be. Please sir, hit me with what you gave Erica. Make me a lion." pleaded Dannie.
"Alright, why not, might as well go with the pair of you together then." I said. "Lets see what a scan will tell me about you, and then lets get right down to the changes."
"Name: Dannie
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Hair colour: Brown
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 178 Lbs.
Eye Colour: Brown
IQ: 111
Mindset: Mild
Self-Esteem: Average
Hair Length: Semi-short
Musculature: 2
Cup Size: -
Friendliness: average
Relationship: Dating
Personal Relationship: Acquaintance
Health: Average
Clothing: Casual (8)
Will Power: 8
Lust: 3
Species: Human.
Job: Web Designer"

"Alright, let's see, it was Lion right," I said out loud, as I changed Species to "Lion 50%, Human 50%." Dannie just nodded, so I kept it as it was. I upped his height to 7'5", Lion's were big, but not as big as Tigers. I upped his Musculature to 8 as well. IQ was bumped up a few points to 127, and I lengthened out his hair to long, to go with his mane. Rather then strain himself like what happened with Erica, I just set clothing all the way down to 0, so that it would just fade away as the changes took place. Then I hit execute and waited for the changes to take place.

Like the others, his ears were the first to change, changing shape, growing tan fur and moving up to the top of his head. As they did, his fake ears faded away, as if they knew they were redundant now.  His tail came next, sprouting from below his jeans at his tail bone. Tan fur covered it, and it ended it a bushy tip covered in longer dark brown fur, the tail at last growing to full length. Like his fake ears, hi fake tail faded away into nothingness as if due to redundancy. His body changed next, growing coarse tan fur all over, growing simultaneously across his body until it became a thick coat of fur. Next hi face began to change, his nose reshaping to the shape of a cat's, then his face pushing out longer into a feline's muzzle, then his teeth reshaping into the long and sharp canines and incisors of a lion's. Whiskers grew out from the sides of his top lip, becoming long and bushy. His hands changed next, growing out into massive paws, pads growing on the underside of his palms and fingers. His nails lengthened into razor sharp claws, with fleshy sheaths for retracting them growing over them. The same changes occurred to  his feet, growing large and padded, his toenails shifting into retractable claws. His mane was the last to grow out, his hair growing into a big bushy lion's mane, the same consistency as the tip of his tail. His fake mane faded away at this point as well. His mane continued to grow, becoming bushy and full all along his head,growing down his back and head as well.
After the physical changes were done, his size began to change as well. He began to grow much taller, swelling in height from just over 6 feet to 7 and a half. His muscles swelled out at this point as well, growing huge as they expanded, giving him massive biceps, triceps and pecs, abs and leg muscles, swelling out to match or exceed the muscle mass of many professional wrestlers. As his size increased, his clothing began to rip apart and fade away as well, first his shoes and socks, then his shirt, his pants, and then at last his underpants as well. At last he reached full size and muscle mass, standing in his full naked glory alongside his girlfriend the Tigress. He let out a low growl of delight when he felt the changes finally stop.

After the changes finished, Erica looked over Dannie, excited and aroused by his new form. "Oh Dear me, your a Gorgeous Beast."
"Oh yes I am aren't I? To go along with you, my Ravishing Tigress." said Dannie in response.
"Thanks again for this gift guys, it is quite literally a dream come true."
"Yeah, sure, no problem, you two have fun then." I said in response.
"Come on Dannie, let's head up to our hotel room, and have a lot of fun." said Erica, almost purring as she spoke seductively.
"Sure thing Kitten" he replied. And with that, they both headed off down the halls, heading off to their motel room.
"Well that was nice of you Jack, but I think it's best if we get out of here now before other people start asking. If we wait here too long, more people will be asking for stuff, and we'll miss the movie, not to mention not have any time to eat" said Lynn.

"Your right, let's get out of here then" I answered, and with that, we left the motel and headed to the mall, heading inside and heading to the Food court. We split up and went to grab some food at different fast food joints, before meeting back up at a free table and sitting down to eat.
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Ninth part of the second season.
Tried out a new poster, also by qwerty1010. It more accurately reflects the main character's current 'after' state.
While still at the convention after transforming a couple into rabbit people, Jack runs into another couple who saw what they did and wants to be turned into big cats. Jack decides to oblige their requests.
I apologize if this one is too long.

Written by ACW
Artwork done by: qwerty1010

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~AllenWatson97 Feb 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
A small cowardly lion reference in there.

Also when will Lynn and jack have fun lil Dannie and Erica are.
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:icontgfwritter:
Not that I want to look like a grammar nazi or anything. But you seriously need to work on the "your" and "you're" among other grammar aspects.

That aside, nice story so far, though I'd critique saying that you need to pace yourself a bit with how you describe and narrate, it seems rushed and too fast.
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:icontgf-019:
ACW-
Yes, you are right, I should really go over these things and make sure I correct obvious typos. I've been lax in my corrections lately.

Hmm, as for the Pacing, I'll keep that in mind. Do you mean the whole story, or just the transformations? The former might be harder to correct, as it is just my writing style and it is not so easy to change or improve just on a whim.
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:icontgfwritter:
Not the transformations, rather, the conversations and plot itself seems to move far too fast, and in that rush you miss important details and lose realism.

Just try considering that not all characters think the same way you do. It's really among the hardest things for a writer since all chars usually have some aspect we ourselves have.

But if you grasp the concept then you'll understand most conversations seem odd because both sides of the exchange have too similar personalities.
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:icontgf-019:
ACW-
Well it's good advice then, and I will try to work on that over time, but it's not something that's going to be fixed overnight, but I will try to keep it in mind when working on more of this and future stories.
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~98sparkz Jul 17, 2012  Student General Artist
I liked this chapter, they did the right thing leaving... If they stayed i'm sure the whole convention would have wanted something but I think it's cute how they helped this couple as well :)
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:icontgf-019:
ACW- Thanks. Yeah, they could have been swamped by people if they stuck around. I was planning on doing more, but I thought it best to move on before they got overwhelmed, things were getting redundant anyway. I included this couple because I really wanted to do a cat related one before moving on.
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Longer is always better as long as the story is interesting ;)
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:icontgf-019:
Well thank you, I'm glad you think so, but I know long can be annoying to read for some. The whole story has probably already eclipsed the first part in length, and it's only just begun.
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:iconsoldatoflife:
As long as you give a little bit of fanservice occasionally, I'll follow your story till the end. But not too much fanservice ;)
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